tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post6045184080586603715..comments2023-06-17T07:51:21.039-06:00Comments on Critical Communication Re-Imagined: Identity: Who is Gideon Burton online?Gideon Burtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08282494104976426309noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-61793361573950629832016-03-21T12:45:41.322-06:002016-03-21T12:45:41.322-06:00If the purpose of this post was to get me to think...If the purpose of this post was to get me to think about my online identity, it did this very well! As far as a hook, I love it!<br /><br />As far as your argument, I would be interested to know more about each individual topic. Maybe if each person researched information about Dr. Burton that is connected to individual project topics, and add a one sentence hook connecting what you found to your individual topics.<br /><br />If you also introduce this as a more general result--Dr. Burton is a normal guy, and if you can find out this wealth of information about him, what can be found about you?J. Argylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03487832977091764641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-16800766325961386772016-03-21T12:41:31.083-06:002016-03-21T12:41:31.083-06:00This was pretty effective. It was similar to a TED...This was pretty effective. It was similar to a TED talk, in that it evoked thoughts instead of telling us what the point is. It's also scary that people are so transparent online.rachelle rachellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03087460217498249401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-68601433917979178102016-03-21T11:39:37.827-06:002016-03-21T11:39:37.827-06:00this was really great! I agree that the initial vi...this was really great! I agree that the initial video was compelling and got me interested in your topic a bit more. I also agree with Michael and think it could be beneficial to discuss the topic of cyberbullyingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10558229993774662142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-39046596160967048672016-03-21T11:39:12.847-06:002016-03-21T11:39:12.847-06:00This was a great idea. Love the video! I just want...This was a great idea. Love the video! I just want to comment on what Mitchell said about how we crave attention, and how that is hindering us from creating real identities. I am one of those people who like to see the likes, the shares, and the comments on my Facebook posts. It means that I'm being noticed! Sometimes--I confess--that I post things just to get a like. And maybe people think that if I like certain things, that's who I am. We are all more than what we like. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16227578355025267954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-86521692135233532792016-03-21T11:27:22.830-06:002016-03-21T11:27:22.830-06:00I loved the initial video; it really got me hooked...I loved the initial video; it really got me hooked! I thought the blog was a little text heavy. It may work best to just have links to each person's blog. <br /><br />I think your theme is really interesting. It raised a few questions for me. What information that we put on the internet could potential be used to harm us. How transparent should we be on the internet? Is the social connection worth the risk? Mazer Rackhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12183506197637192771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-75375028170362043422016-03-21T10:40:13.641-06:002016-03-21T10:40:13.641-06:00The picture at the beginning had me hooked.The picture at the beginning had me hooked.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01286038979120056359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-3885034876352350342016-03-21T10:00:09.573-06:002016-03-21T10:00:09.573-06:00This was such a great idea for your video - especi...This was such a great idea for your video - especially taking into account your audience for this first iteration. Great job!Chloe Averyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09965702110827528314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-14960581087724539922016-03-21T09:29:55.956-06:002016-03-21T09:29:55.956-06:00The video is compelling, especially to an audience...The video is compelling, especially to an audience like our class. The internet contains who we are, but can it mold and change who we are? This is a provocative question. I think you could even dip more into cyberbullying, an interesting misuse of online identity.Michael Anthony Stevenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18276500904439778962noreply@blogger.com