tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post8033433645196616493..comments2023-06-17T07:51:21.039-06:00Comments on Critical Communication Re-Imagined: How Much Control Do We Have Over Our Identity?Gideon Burtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08282494104976426309noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-18723426615698496992016-03-30T12:15:07.377-06:002016-03-30T12:15:07.377-06:00this was a really catchy and really informative po...this was a really catchy and really informative post! I do agree however that it could use some break up of all the text. Maybe a picture or video could help. I also think it should be a bit more uniform, the text across the whole post varies in size, etc. Overall, the content is wonderful! The form could just use a little tweaking. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10558229993774662142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-34243514906198985412016-03-30T11:12:46.844-06:002016-03-30T11:12:46.844-06:00This was a really eye catching post! I was just sc...This was a really eye catching post! I was just scrolling through all of the other posts and then suddenly I realized that I was reading your entire post. Great work!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06716509317748806517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-76700265769999142952016-03-30T11:05:10.567-06:002016-03-30T11:05:10.567-06:00Very catchy post! Your visual design drew my eye t...Very catchy post! Your visual design drew my eye to key points that helped me become drawn into your topic without even knowing anything about it. Good relevance to todays issues-I had an emotional attachment to this topic after reading your comments on Apple's new software update. KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10399993333189938255noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-53196933290242550122016-03-30T11:05:01.869-06:002016-03-30T11:05:01.869-06:00Agreeing with the above comments, I would add in a...Agreeing with the above comments, I would add in a few more pictures and links. I liked how organized your post was though and felt that it was very easy/fun to read. Maybe you could elaborate a bit more on the show Catfish? I think that would help people understand how contemporary this issue is. Then, instead of posting the meme you could post a picture of Nev and Max or something instead because I think that would be a bit more effective than the meme. Last, I would just be aware that technically, we are not your audience so the "mormon girl" part in the beginning might be super confusing to the rest of your readers and they will be wondering the whole time how that fits in. Just a suggestion though! Chloe Averyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09965702110827528314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-48028822906600638622016-03-30T10:43:33.063-06:002016-03-30T10:43:33.063-06:00I think you have a really strong argument. I found...I think you have a really strong argument. I found myself wanting to protect myself more on social media and other places on other websites. One thing I would say is that it that your post is a little too text-heavy. I think a picture more, or a link to a website could shorten things a little.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16227578355025267954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8441758389977123332.post-38160138437091967522016-03-30T10:31:23.950-06:002016-03-30T10:31:23.950-06:00That was wonderfully entertaining to read, but the...That was wonderfully entertaining to read, but there were a few parts that felt almost like they were birdwalks. Also lots of available opportunites to put in hyperlinks.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01286038979120056359noreply@blogger.com