Facebook feedback below:
Here is a screenshot of the comments that some of my Facebook friends left for me. I had some positives and negatives, which is good, because I like to see both sides. I have gotten mostly disagreements with my argument since most people think that technology has a lot of benefits, like connecting with people, or talking with people who live far away, and creating a relationship with media as a basis (like Grace pointed out).
As for reshaping what I want to say, I think I'll add more of the impacts of social media with face-to-face interaction (like my mom Lisa pointed out), and how that ties in to civilization. Like people seem to socialize over media, and that is how the world (civilizations and societies) are communicating with one another. Media is hindering society because people want to talk over screen or phone rather than face-to-face.